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Inherited Scars ......
Contributed by
erin_burger
on
Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 12:57:18 PM in AEST
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oops
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You know , Your face looks familar I swear Ive seen your smile before,
Probably , back in the days when we wore arrest warrants ,
Like decorative medals of honur and we swore ,
Chemical lies,
In white lines ,
Through bloodshot eyes that are raw,
Battlescars that rise from an inner war.
Strolled down jack daniels road , and smoked and choked , till ur all alone on a island starnded from your pain , so let it rain ,
and strike a vien ,
Ripping the uniform,
White dialect told .
thats it nowhere u havent been before,
Weeping the red tears of a tired whore ,
Battlescars that rise from an inner war .
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erin_burger
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2005-01-08 12:57:18]
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Re: Inherited Scars ......
(User Rating: 1 )
by afterdark on
Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 12:58:44 PM AEST
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| Your spelling was a tad off in some areas but really other then that it was a good poem..Not to bad. |
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Re: Inherited Scars ......
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 02:54:28 PM AEST
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| great write. i liked how this was written. |
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