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Just One
Contributed by
Lia
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Tuesday, 3rd December 2002 @ 08:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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The wind never passes through just one breathe
The sun never shines on just one life
The rain never waters just one seed
A butterfly doesn't fly with just one wing
...just one wish...
The moon doesn't glow over just one mountain
The sands of time aren't just one grain
A child's laugh isn't just one sound
A rainbow never stretchs itself across the sky with just one color
...just one dream..
A heart doesn't beat just one beat
A love doesn't last just one day
A life never ends with just one kiss
A dream never last just one nite
...just you...
Copyright ©
Lia
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2002-12-03 20:00:00]
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Re: Just One
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by MoonlitAngel on
Tuesday, 3rd December 2002 @ 08:13:09 PM AEST
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This is so pretty! Just goes to show that you don't need to use big words or make it really long for a poem to be good, and effective, and inspirational. I absolutely love this!
~ MoonlitAngel |
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Re: Just One
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by MoonlitAngel on
Tuesday, 3rd December 2002 @ 08:13:13 PM AEST
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This is so pretty! Just goes to show that you don't need to use big words or make it really long for a poem to be good, and effective, and inspirational. I absolutely love this!
~ MoonlitAngel |
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Re: Just One
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by wrn on
Tuesday, 3rd December 2002 @ 11:28:52 PM AEST
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| This is such a pretty poem. Such a beautiful and true statement. |
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Re: Just One
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by OreO on
Wednesday, 4th December 2002 @ 07:53:23 PM AEST
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This is so beautifully written, and so true..and such strong words this poem has....i would have to say this is a masterpiece...Beautiful write Lia..
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:. |
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Re: Just One
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by WordPoet on
Monday, 13th January 2003 @ 03:49:06 PM AEST
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Just one comment for me to make,
Just one word for me to say,
Just one word I'll never fake,
Just one great poem I've read today...
Good job... Glad to see you posting again... |
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