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Under Bandages of Morose
Contributed by
Pocket
on
Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 11:54:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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When pain consumes you
And forbids to breath
What method do you choose
When blood under bandages seeths
When your life betrays you
Do you lie alone unforgiving
And you feel frozen as your lips turn blue
And you long for your awaited delivering
When the only face you see
Is that of your moroseness
Do you stop, bow your head, and grieve
Do you suddenly feel in the air the closeness
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Re: Under Bandages of Morose
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by girltranscended on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 07:41:50 PM AEST
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"When your life betrays you
Do you lie alone unforgiving"
I especially like these lines and the title rocks too!
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Re: Under Bandages of Morose
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by hardrocker15198916 on
Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 01:25:02 PM AEST
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| it was interesting. a good write. i think it shouldve been just alitte longer it was good all together^-^ |
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