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tear drops
Contributed by
mina-1
on
Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 06:23:25 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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The tear drops roll along my face
Flowing sadly with a quick pace
As i cry they fall down quickly
Each tear falling down so swiftly
The tears i cry feel as hot as blood
When i think of you my eyes just flood
My emotions are so hard to contain
Just like a steady stream my tears maintain
They fall constantly when i think of you
My eyes are weary and i'm feeling the blues
I thought that i was surely blessed
But you know i should've guessed
That all good things come to a quick end
Now i'm left with a heavy heart to mend
These tears will forever fall
Ever since you walked out the door
Every tear i shed breaks my heart
Because i know you and I will always be apart
Copyright ©
mina-1
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2005-01-08 06:23:25]
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Re: tear drops
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by lostinmyself on
Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 07:27:59 AM AEST
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Awww. Well this is a strong contrast to you most recent poem.
Ouch. This is so sad. I know how much losing love hurts.
I hope you have found it again, or will find it again soon.
*hugs* Phil xxx |
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Re: tear drops
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by jmpy84 on
Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 07:28:05 AM AEST
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| very emotional well written |
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Re: tear drops
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by pixie on
Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 07:50:00 AM AEST
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I love poems about tear drops, (not that I like to hear of your sadness *hugs*) but I think they are always written so gently and emotionally, great poem
pixie xx |
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Re: tear drops
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by BlindSuicide on
Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 10:01:13 AM AEST
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Very well expressed, and i'll have to agree with the other commenters, very emotional. Just keep in mind though, that there will be others.
~Alucia~ |
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Re: tear drops
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by forgottenone_iam on
Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 10:29:12 AM AEST
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| wow that was really really good keep writing. i look forward to reading your other rightings. KIMMIE |
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