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no name
Contributed by
simon_says
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Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 06:22:21 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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i want to feel the sound of rain
frustrates me itches the pain
that i dont feel
i cry for nothing
im tucked and napping into my own bare arms.
which doesnt mean alot look as it harms
the squirming eyes
i see apocalypse everyday
it is becoming my fingers and my mouth
my north and my south
when i turn.
i try to learn i cant see a meaning
i wanna scream to you all .
but i cant hear myself when i turn
and i cant remember why i did coil in the first place..
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Re: no name
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by One on
Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 10:47:05 AM AEST
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have you forgotten what the wind feels like?
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Re: no name
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by BEE on
Wednesday, 19th April 2006 @ 11:19:24 PM AEST
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| Very strong and meaningful!! i love it how your short sentences are soo strong |
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