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On The Inside
Contributed by
EverlastingDawn
on
Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 06:01:59 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Deep inside of me
Is a void
A blank space never to be filled
Inside of me
There is no heart
For there is nothing for me to love
Inside of me
There is no conscience
No overruling voice to guide me
Inside of me
There is no soul
Because I have no feelings to be felt
On the outside
There is an illusion
For no one wants to see the real me
Deep inside of me
I am empty
Inside of me
There is nothing
I am nothing
Copyright ©
EverlastingDawn
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2005-01-08 06:01:59]
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Re: On The Inside
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by lostinmyself on
Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 07:34:19 AM AEST
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This is good, I read it once, and when I saw it change half way through I was sure I wouldn't like it so much at the end.
But..I do. I see that it was right to change the way you started each stanza.
Good write.
*hugs* Phil xxx |
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Re: On The Inside
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by pixie on
Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 07:52:34 AM AEST
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good write, expressed clearly and well,
pixie xx |
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