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Not Enough
Contributed by
EverlastingDawn
on
Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 05:57:41 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Sometimes
Tears are empty
Sometimes
Reflections are not seen
Sometimes
Pleas are not heard
Sometimes
Prayers go unanswered
Sometimes
Cries are not acknowledged
Sometimes
Denial can be better
Sometimes
The truth just hurts too much
Sometimes
Love is not enough
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EverlastingDawn
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2005-01-08 05:57:41] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Not Enough
(User Rating: 1 ) by Unheard_Voice on
Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 09:00:34 AM AEST (User
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Interesting topic. Though the poem could be written better. Strong emotions, yet they could be portrayed better. The format you chose is not ideal for this poem. But, it's not that bad. |
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