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All I Want (shorter version)
Contributed by
sick_n_twisted
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Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 01:11:59 AM in AEST
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All I want is to be happy
But yet I still feel real crappy
I cut so much lastnight the blade wasnt sharpe anymore
My skin just tore
The blade slashing my wrist
This feeling it will be missed
My wrist,I look at it its swelling
But the senation was over whelming
How did I get so low
Belive me no one will ever know
When I cry,No one cares
No one even stares or wonder no one dares
I was looking for a blade
But it got delaide
Because I need a blade,Geez wheres a blade??
I couldnt find one
This wont be finnished til' its done
I cry and scream saying I need to bleed
My mind and body feels the need
The blade slashing my wrist
That feeling I so dearly missed
I wanna look at my wrist and see swelling
I wanna feel the sensation its over whelming
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Re: All I Want (shorter version)
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by emystar on
Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 02:03:37 AM AEST
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So very sad but written well.
huggs, luv,
emy |
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Re: All I Want (shorter version)
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by mina-1 on
Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 07:10:30 AM AEST
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a very sad poem.
written well
sue |
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Re: All I Want (shorter version)
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by angel_eyes70 on
Thursday, 14th April 2005 @ 01:54:50 PM AEST
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| that was sad. but i was a good write. *hugs* |
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