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All I Want

Contributed by sick_n_twisted on Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 12:57:16 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

All I want is to be happy
But yet I still feel real crappy
I cut so much lastnight the blade wasnt sharpe anymore
My skin just tore
The blade slashing my wrist
This feeling it will be missed
My wrist,I look at it its swelling
But the senation was over whelming
You drink to much thats the truth
Do you want some proof?
While you were were drinking last night you left me with your baby
I didnt say maybe
I said straight out NO!
How did you get so low
Belive me no one will ever know
When I cry,No one care
No one even stares or wonder no one dares
I was looking for a blade
But it got delaide
Because I need a blade,Geez wheres a blade??
I couldnt find one
This wont be finnished til' its done
I cry and scream saying I need to bleed
My mind and body feels the need
The blade slashing my wrist
That feeling I so dearly missed
I wanna look at my wrist and see swelling
I wanna feel the sensation its over whelming

Copyright © sick_n_twisted ... [ 2005-01-08 00:57:16]
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Re: All I Want (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 09:56:23 PM AEST
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beside some forced rhymes this was really good. this seemed very songlike. maybe later in life you will want other things?

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