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A lifetime for one night
Contributed by
BlindSuicide
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Friday, 7th January 2005 @ 08:24:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I could never imagine feeling this way about you
When i first revealed my true feelings you had no clue
You didn't know that for a long time i have been madly in love with you
If i didn't tell you then you would have never guessed
I didn't even know because for the longest i thought i was obsessed
I know it sounds crazy but it's true
I've fallen head over heels for you
I find myself thinking of you all the time
I even had a dream once that you were here and you were mine
Yeah wishful thinking i know it's crazy
But i'd give anything to have your arms around me
To have you hold me all through the night
And hear you whisper softly in my ear that everything is all right
That would be a nearly perfect night
I'd give a lifetime to spend a day with you
And i would sit and stare at you for hours just because i had nothing to do
I would hold you forever and never let go
I would shout i love you just to let the world know
I hope all of this is making since to you
Because this is just the beginning i'm far from through
I would sit here and write all night just because i wanted to
I'd fly thousands of miles to spend one day with you
I'd give you the world if it was in my hand
And i'll love you forever just because i can
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BlindSuicide
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2005-01-07 20:24:54]
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Re: A lifetime for one night
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by afterdark on
Friday, 7th January 2005 @ 08:35:37 PM AEST
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| hmmmm |
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Re: A lifetime for one night
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by afterdark on
Friday, 7th January 2005 @ 08:48:50 PM AEST
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| You know my problem is not with you or your subject simply that what yoiu are hoping for really is a movie type fantasy..And in comment to my comments..Yes I am a f-ucker..And until you know anything of what reality is in certain areas it is much wiser to choose to be wise..I think I have lived long enough to realise what is real.If you choose love then so be it..Go for what you desire..My comments are my own,,Agree disagree Am I a Prick? Yes,YES i AM |
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Re: A lifetime for one night
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by BlindSuicide on
Friday, 7th January 2005 @ 08:54:56 PM AEST
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| Everybody has their own opnion and you stated yours, thats fine. However there is a time and place for opnions and when somebody is expressing their feelings that is not the time for your opnion. If you have something bad to say about a poem, why even waste your time commenting? That will just make the person feel worse. This site is about support, not critisim. I don't have anything against you personally, just some things are better left unsaid. |
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Re: A lifetime for one night
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by subchild on
Friday, 7th January 2005 @ 08:56:51 PM AEST
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| As a woman I agree with afterdark..His comments are his own..Shut the ***** up if they dont appeal to you..Whine about love somewhere else |
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Re: A lifetime for one night
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by BlindSuicide on
Friday, 7th January 2005 @ 09:01:04 PM AEST
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| And as you agree with him, then must must have a pathetic life as well. Anyways i'm not going to waste my time arguing with you. For one this had nothing to do with you. As i said yes your opnion is your own but there IS a time and place for bad ones. As i said before this is NOT!! So if you wish to waste your time and keep commenting, more power to ya but i hope you enjoy talking to yourself, because i'm more mature than that. I feel sorry for you and him. If you have to critisze somebody for satisfaction, you need serious help. Thats ALL i have to say on this matter. |
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Re: A lifetime for one night
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by Mangs on
Friday, 7th January 2005 @ 10:25:15 PM AEST
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I Dunno what the others are on about....but this poem is absolutely wonderful ...very nice write...
Umang. |
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Re: A lifetime for one night
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by blowfish_jane on
Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 02:44:24 AM AEST
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Aww that was such a beautiful write, i like it and i have no idea why the other people here are on your case but dont mind them, you write what you feel and a lot of us here support you 100%
Hugs,
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