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iMAGINE DEATH
Contributed by
PixieLovezChrisSchwoerer
on
Friday, 7th January 2005 @ 05:03:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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IT'S A LONG JOURNEY IN THE DARK.
AN ENDLESS WALK IN SILENCE,
A PEACEFUL CLASH WITH SLEEP.
IMAGINE.... GOING TO SLEEP,
AND NEVER WAKING.
BEING FORGOTTEN AFTER YEARS AND YEARS.
LIFE FLASHING BEFORE YOUR EYES;
REUNITING WITH YOUR PAST.
IMAGINE.... DYING YOUNG,
UR LIFE STILL YET TO COME;
UNDISCOVERED,WASTED,LOST,GONE FOREVER......
.........UNFINISHED.............
Copyright ©
PixieLovezChrisSchwoerer
... [
2005-01-07 17:03:29]
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Re: iMAGINE DEATH
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by Ravensfire on
Friday, 7th January 2005 @ 05:46:35 PM AEST
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| ok, ok, i'll comment, very tragic, heartbreaking, true though bout being dead seems people forget. good write. |
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Re: iMAGINE DEATH
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by autumngreeneyes on
Friday, 7th January 2005 @ 05:57:02 PM AEST
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| rather comment when it's finished.. |
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Re: iMAGINE DEATH
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by afterdark on
Friday, 7th January 2005 @ 06:16:40 PM AEST
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| Another attention seeking person asking begging for comments..You know most ppl who really have the nerve to kill themselves just do it without help or wanting to get attention..Here's a good thought..Six vicodin,6 xanex,wash it down with Vodka.. |
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Re: iMAGINE DEATH
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by screwup on
Friday, 7th January 2005 @ 06:48:32 PM AEST
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didnt like this one much
xXx |
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Re: iMAGINE DEATH
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by Kratur on
Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 10:26:39 AM AEST
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| you shouldve made us wait for PICTURE PERFECT because that was by far your best one and probably among the top 10 i've ever read... this one is alright, but i think my expectations are unfairly too high... i know you have more gold, lets see it! |
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