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Shooting Star
Contributed by
juggalette_chick666pk
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Friday, 7th January 2005 @ 03:47:18 PM in AEST
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Dreams of the night swirl around in my head,
I look up at the stars,
I think about the night and how it's revealed,
To see a shooting star is to see a flash of light,
Streaming across the night sky,
Wondering who watching at the same time,
Feelings of hope are sincere,
Dreaming of the night,
It swirls in my head,
Wish upon that flash of light,
Flash of light? Or Hope?
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2005-01-07 15:47:18]
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Re: Shooting Star
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by New_York_Chick on
Friday, 7th January 2005 @ 03:50:52 PM AEST
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i liked the way you ended it, and yeah i wondered about who else is watching the shooting star at the same time as me too
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Re: Shooting Star
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by autumngreeneyes on
Friday, 7th January 2005 @ 04:16:53 PM AEST
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| that's really cool that we can all be seeing the same universe, huh?.. nice write. |
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Re: Shooting Star
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by Unheard_Mute on
Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 10:07:10 PM AEST
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| wow... I never thought of that... |
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Re: Shooting Star
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by Juggalette_chick666pk on
Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 10:14:19 AM AEST
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you need to be happy
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