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FLOWING TEARS
Contributed by
craz2
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Friday, 7th January 2005 @ 02:45:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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FLOWING TEARS
OH HOW THE TEARS FLOW
NO MORE CALLS
NO MORE MADAM YOU HAVE MAIL
NO MORE HOW IS YOUR DAY
NO MORE JOKES TO BRIGHTEN THE WAY
OH HOW THE TEARS KEEP FLOWING
THE DAYS ARE SO LONG
THE NIGHTS SO DARK
THE MORNINGS WITHOUT A TRACE
OH HOW THE TEARS KEEP FLOWING
HOW CAN YOU NOT LOOK IN MY PLACE
I WAIT TO SEE THAT TALL HANDSOME MAN
HE NEVER GRACES THE DOOR
I MUST BE AN EYESORE
I MUST HAVE BEEN A BORE
THERE MUST BE A CURE
PLEASE HELP ME TO RESTORE
OH HOW THE TEARS KEEP FLOWING
TEARS TEARS GO AWAY
FOR HE HAS RUNAWAY
OH HOW THE TEARS KEEP FLOWING
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craz2
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2005-01-07 14:45:52]
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Re: FLOWING TEARS
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 7th January 2005 @ 02:57:21 PM AEST
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It's so sad. The heartbreak is well expressed.
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Re: FLOWING TEARS
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by mina-1 on
Friday, 7th January 2005 @ 03:34:34 PM AEST
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well expressed and so sad. keep up the good work,
luv,
sue |
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Re: FLOWING TEARS
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by kidpoet_213 on
Friday, 7th January 2005 @ 03:42:07 PM AEST
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I agree with the others... ur sadness is well expressed... good write.
~Donna~ |
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Re: FLOWING TEARS
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by New_York_Chick on
Friday, 7th January 2005 @ 04:03:34 PM AEST
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yeah i agree too, this is very sad
it would make a nice song i think |
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Re: FLOWING TEARS
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by Stitch on
Friday, 7th January 2005 @ 04:57:54 PM AEST
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Ouch. I felt every line of this one. Is there any other hurt so intense? I doubt it. Nice stuff.
Stitch |
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