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Never
Contributed by
Gigi_15
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Friday, 7th January 2005 @ 02:12:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I look at him right in the eye
Wondering if he would figure it out this time
Wondering if he'll ever be mine
I don't think so
And this feeling for him just doesn't seem to go
I wish he could know
What I feel for him
It just hurts so much when
He holds me so thight
And it feels so right
But I know he'll never be mine
I'm living in a fantasy of me and him
It's a lie that has never been
Give it a chance they say
But my chances with him seem so gray
Being with him is what..
........I would'nt dare to dream about
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2005-01-07 14:12:17]
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Re: Never
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 7th January 2005 @ 02:54:01 PM AEST
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| Been there more than once in my life. You have created a good description of what goes through one's mind. We're al so oblivious to each other, no wonder it's so difficult. Cheers! |
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Re: Never
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by Spazzo on
Saturday, 15th January 2005 @ 01:39:53 PM AEST
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Great write. But try and be more positive. Like you should never say that it will never happen.
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Re: Never
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by Wachumiri on
Wednesday, 27th July 2005 @ 10:19:00 PM AEST
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Some people enter our lives to be just that, dreams. To keep us going another day. Wouldn't you die to have the wisdom to know what people are here for our hearts, and which ones for our dreams? I know I would.
Take care.
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