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Daylight Hears You Crawl
Contributed by
Lee
on
Friday, 7th January 2005 @ 12:04:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
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Daylight hears you crawl
Daylight here she comes
Talkin' to you pleasantly
About the weather presently
It seems there might be
A cloud comin' through
She wants to talk with you
And tell you all about what she saw
A water drop firstly
Then steady the sky was bursting
And the desert used to be thirsty
She came in
And she sat down
At the table
Her hair was dark and brown
She stared for a minute
Then looked down for two
She was chasing spirits
In your lively saloon
Daylight hears you crawl
Across the desert
Into the bathroom stall
You've made your bed
In muddy straw
She said "I think the Sun is comin' for us all."
Copyright ©
Lee
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2005-01-07 12:04:46]
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Re: Daylight Hears You Crawl
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by enjoiskating6 on
Friday, 7th January 2005 @ 12:11:43 PM AEST
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| unbelievably good. i loved the whole thing. keep posting, your poetry is something everyone should see |
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Re: Daylight Hears You Crawl
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by wray on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 06:46:42 AM AEST
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| Wow. I have no idea what this was about but it sounded awesome. |
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