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Patiently Waiting

Contributed by 307luvs09 on Friday, 7th January 2005 @ 10:43:14 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

I wonder if deep inside there are feelings
For her you’re trying to hide
if we’ll ever look back and say this is the day your love for her died.
I wonder if
all those memories
Leave room for me
I often wonder if this is where we should
Be.
At times I must admit,
I feel like throwing a jealous fit
But you see love prevents a woman
From doing this.
Love will turn that emotion into a kiss
Love reminds me you’ve always been
First on my list.

When I met you
You were Marley’d out.
One Love was the cry
except for the field
You wouldn’t hurt a fly.
Ice Cube was the prophet that
“ain’t never told a lie”

Now a days your covered with despair
This beast I see was once a cuddly bear,
Talk of violence and revenge is all that seems to fill the air
I am told
that with a little age
One day together we’ll turn back to that other page.
Where once we loved each other for who we were,
Where once our differences made our future so bright.
Back when you were My shining Knight

Copyright Â© 307luvs09 ... [ 2005-01-07 10:43:14]
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Re: Patiently Waiting (User Rating: 1 )
by Pats4eva7 on Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 10:54:56 AM AEST
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You're very good at writing and getting your point across, whether that point be a serious aspect of life or an interpersonal one, either way good write and keep it up.
~*~melyssa~*~

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