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JUDGEMENT DAY
Contributed by
sweetangeluk
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Friday, 7th January 2005 @ 10:17:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Evil flows like a waterfall
Words that do not enthral
Flowing as clear as glass
Revenge is sweet surpass
Love laughter sadness and tears
Emotions smiles anger fears
Locked inside this stream of thought
Leaving a trail feelings distraught
Positive vibes wanting to express
You will not destroy love and success
Judgement day looms what's in store
What gods takes he will not restore
Should your soul fear the night
Fountain of life to see the light
Beware of words bittersweet
Engage yourself evidence complete
Such evil can never find
Compassion that leads the mind
Sleep well for your time is near
Through the waterfall crystal clear
Nightmares lost in a crimson stream
Desperate cries piercing screams
Patience is running oh so thin
Judgement day still think you can win?
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sweetangeluk
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2005-01-07 10:17:26]
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Re: JUDGEMENT DAY
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 7th January 2005 @ 10:22:44 AM AEST
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| relentless. liked it a lot. |
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Re: JUDGEMENT DAY
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by pixie on
Friday, 7th January 2005 @ 10:23:35 AM AEST
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a great use of anger, made for a brillaint poem, well done
pixie xx |
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Re: JUDGEMENT DAY
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by Rakerman1999 on
Friday, 7th January 2005 @ 10:24:17 AM AEST
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People , unfortunately, can be the most loathsome creatures...... You've expressed your anger clearly here in a well written venting.
Excellent write in both content and technique.
Roses to make you feel better ;o)
Larry |
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Re: JUDGEMENT DAY
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by DorianChambers on
Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 12:53:20 AM AEST
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u r wise beyond the obvious, this is a beautiful testament 2 life, and death, and that in between
realm, know as the wake up call 2 all of us, your
one skillful poet, i like it very much . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: JUDGEMENT DAY
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by emystar on
Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 10:09:39 AM AEST
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What awesomely, thought prevoking write.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy
I can certainly relate. |
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Re: JUDGEMENT DAY
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by SimplyMe on
Friday, 25th March 2005 @ 01:36:28 AM AEST
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You should share this with the person causing you so much anger. I'm quite sure they'd get the picture. Lol. Anywho. Very well said. I will Piggy-back Ben, You are very wise indeed, and it shows clearly. Brillant write.
~Alucia~ |
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Re: JUDGEMENT DAY
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by Archie on
Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 03:54:31 AM AEST
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| Good poem. Not exactly my view of Judgement day. But it is a great read nonetheless. |
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Re: JUDGEMENT DAY
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 05:18:22 PM AEST
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| Amen. Excellent write. Wish I could answer the question, but I don't know either. |
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