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Untitled
Contributed by
gherkin
on
Friday, 7th January 2005 @ 10:13:25 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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She fades away
like a summers day
She looks to me
her eyes dont see
She holds her breath
whilst under my ocean
She plays with death
She drinks my potion
and she plays in the dust
created by lust
all this my creation
all this my demise
I have no explanation
yet a cauldron of lies
and for those times she wept
and unsoundly slept
Im afraid I regret
everytime our bodies met
The moments they were gold
I meant all I told
thing is my souls been sold
and now my heart is cold
I wish i had the warmth
to hold you through the night
to keep you safe and sheltered
and from them out of sight
But I am far from an angel
I hold only one power
thats the skill to break your heart
and the ability to turn you sour
So you should stay away
That way you will be fine
because believe me it'll kill you
to stay here being mine
Copyright ©
gherkin
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2005-01-07 10:13:25]
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Re: Untitled
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by pixie on
Friday, 7th January 2005 @ 10:14:57 AM AEST
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your poetry is so deep and emotional, its great, I love it"
pixie xx |
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Re: Untitled
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 7th January 2005 @ 10:16:40 AM AEST
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| that was my favourite poem ive read in a few months. It's theme i can relate to in a rather different way but on similar lines. bottom line - loved it. |
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Re: Untitled
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by bonita2689 on
Friday, 7th January 2005 @ 07:11:14 PM AEST
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| This is a very unique write, I like it. It has depth not sought by many poets...whoever wrote it has great skill |
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Re: Untitled
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by lovesucks on
Friday, 7th January 2005 @ 08:19:28 PM AEST
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Poet unknown, but point well made. I have been on both sides of this fence. Such a vicious cycle, hard to break....Awesome, truthful, touching write.
Theresa |
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