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For My Love Of Death
Contributed by
pixie
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Friday, 7th January 2005 @ 09:33:23 AM in AEST
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For my eternal love of death,
I give to thee my very last breath,
Hand over my body on a silver plate,
Waiting for the devil to consummate.
As I hear him coming nearer & nearer,
In my mind the fear becomes clearer,
But I can not get away or make my escape,
I know that I知 about to endure such an evil rape.
But there is nothing at all that I can do,
I just close my eyes & hope I値l pull through,
He will toy with me for his cruel games,
Then leave me to rot inside with all the shame.
I love death but I don稚 wish to die,
But for my love I know I値l be made to cry,
I have given so much to my master,
But he will make sure I値l suffer ever after.
My death will be that of a slow one,
He will watch whilst having so much fun,
The last thing I値l hear is my master laugh,
Then in my bloody remains he値l take a bath.
Copyright ﾂｩ
pixie
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Re: For My Love Of Death
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by 307luvs09 on
Friday, 7th January 2005 @ 09:38:27 AM AEST
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pixie. wow. this is powerful and strong. great poem. your work is very descriptive. I love it. keep up the good work. You have a new fan.
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Re: For My Love Of Death
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by Willofree on
Friday, 7th January 2005 @ 10:58:33 AM AEST
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Wow! This is a powerful and a emotional write. Very descriptive wording and imagery. A excellant poem on a difficult subject of death.
Well done
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Re: For My Love Of Death
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by enjoiskating6 on
Friday, 7th January 2005 @ 11:18:18 AM AEST
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| wow pixie i really liked that. the last line was extremely powerful and really made me shiver. good description! |
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Re: For My Love Of Death
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by Kratur on
Friday, 7th January 2005 @ 11:53:23 AM AEST
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Insane blue to the green man inn
Toss the lights and pray that you're dead
Experiment from the 53
And feel the pillow over your head
由ob Zombie
I love your writings thus far, pixie. I'd love to see what other blasphemies you have. |
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Re: For My Love Of Death
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by afterdark on
Friday, 7th January 2005 @ 12:09:09 PM AEST
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| Amazing is all needs to be said |
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Re: For My Love Of Death
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by DorianChambers on
Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 01:02:20 AM AEST
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excellent pixie, u have a knack 4 the macarbe as well as the romantic, i like the rhythum 2 this i could see u and your adversary as though this were a little movie, verry challenging 2 whom ever this was aimed at , well done . . .
Dorian Chambers
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