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The System
Contributed by
Seikjo
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Friday, 7th January 2005 @ 09:28:46 AM in AEST
Topic:
secrets
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It can control us.
It can eradicate our lives in a blink of an eye.
It can make us invisble like a ghost.
It can wipe out our fondest memories.
It is the system.
The system of life, and power.
While one dies the other gains control of it's power.
The system can beat us all.
Copyright ©
Seikjo
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2005-01-07 09:28:46]
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Re: The System
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 7th January 2005 @ 10:52:58 AM AEST
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| Solar system? ;-) Interesting... Cheers! |
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Re: The System
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by Mihiri on
Friday, 7th January 2005 @ 10:57:27 AM AEST
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Wonderful write!! Reminds me of The Matrix!! : )
bibi!
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Re: The System
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by Arsenic on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 10:03:43 AM AEST
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That’s a little creepy. Nevertheless, I like it.
Makes me consider all the truthes I KNOW, and that we never really know, do we?
Arsenic
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Re: The System
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by lost_chadow on
Saturday, 5th November 2005 @ 11:08:37 PM AEST
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| Ouch, there's a blow to our pride. And we spend so much time trying to beat the system, don't we? I liiiike. |
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