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The Man, The Victim, The Killer, The Figure
Contributed by
declinefoale
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Friday, 7th January 2005 @ 06:43:39 AM in AEST
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Then it felt to him like time had slowed down to a crawl
The figure spun around with such grace he though the figure could have been a dancer
He had just enough time to look deeply in to the eyes of his killer
They were dark green, the saddest darkest eyes he had ever seen
They told countless stories of lost loves and lost lives
Holding a world of solitude and abuse in those eyes he saw a harrowing lifelessness
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Re: The Man, The Victim, The Killer, The Figure
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by Kratur on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 03:18:51 PM AEST
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The killer is like a man bearing a great burden, each victim bringing him to the brink of self-destruction, but oh god he can't stop though, and he just has to do it, drive-redux he needs it
killing is like cutting yourself
because it feels good |
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Re: The Man, The Victim, The Killer, The Figure
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by xtremcalibur on
Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 02:44:38 AM AEST
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| I wish I could read the rest because your write left me wanting to read more. So far so good. |
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