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BURNED SANITY
Contributed by
darkkai
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Tuesday, 3rd December 2002 @ 11:00:00 AM in AEST
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If I could remember my past, things should be more happier.
The snow destroyed my mind, the edge almost killed me.
I still died from the pain, fused with abnormalities I think
differently now. A memory lingers and weighs me down.
I can't shake it cos' He altered my sanity and brought everyone
with me to hell. Now, I stand clear of harm and those I care about.
No one loves me because I have no friends. Then, angry and hurt,
I wanted to be left alone.
Copyright ©
darkkai
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2002-12-03 11:00:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: BURNED SANITY
(User Rating: 1 ) by me_n_me_alone on
Tuesday, 3rd December 2002 @ 11:42:21 AM AEST (User
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Great write! this poerm was written with a lot of emotion , or so it seems. Keep em comming
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Re: BURNED SANITY
(User Rating: 1 ) by plous on
Tuesday, 3rd December 2002 @ 10:07:48 PM AEST (User
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Nice catch, do you write like that often. |
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Re: BURNED SANITY
(User Rating: 1 ) by OreO on
Wednesday, 4th December 2002 @ 10:32:02 AM AEST (User
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I enjoyed this one alot...my favorite lines are.....He altered my sanity and brought everyone with me to hell....thanks for sharing it, it's beautifully written..
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:.
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