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JADED ESSENCE
Contributed by
darkkai
on
Tuesday, 3rd December 2002 @ 10:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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In a never ending fight to survive, Blood and sweat burn through my pores.
Scars show years of stuggle and I am tired. Aged to perfect wisdom
from a past, my dark soul had seen an epiphany........ Bright days ahead.
Flounder the dreams I have for too long, Fatigue sets in. Symmetrical
understandings of a future can happen. Unconformities arise yet fall
quickly to analyze. My humanity denudes my strong heart with ambitions
of advanced life. Come what may........I plan to live forever.
Copyright ©
darkkai
... [
2002-12-03 10:30:00]
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Re: JADED ESSENCE
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by LOWMAN613 on
Tuesday, 3rd December 2002 @ 10:37:50 AM AEST
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Congrats on your therapy session!
Good write here,lots of feeling,Christina |
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Re: JADED ESSENCE
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by OreO on
Tuesday, 3rd December 2002 @ 10:51:20 AM AEST
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My favorite line is aged to perfect wisdom...that's beautiful...and a very strong ending with alot of hope and strength...thanks for sharing this one i enjoyed it alot...
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:. |
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