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fantasy world
Contributed by
karmen
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Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 09:23:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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In a fantasy world,
everything would be perfect.
Everyone would have a home,
and no child would be left alone.
Loved ones would be forced to leave,
and never come back possibly.
True love would always be real.
Hearts wouldn’t break,
and lives wouldn’t come crashing down.
People wouldn’t have to beg for money,
just to say alive another day.
In this fantasy world,
fathers wouldn’t leave there babies,
and mothers would always be there.
Fright wouldn’t even exist.
Friends would really be forever.
People wouldn’t be made fun of,
just because there different.
It wouldn’t even be an option.
But this is just a fantasy world, of course.
Maybe one day it can be real,
but for now, I doubt it.
Copyright ©
karmen
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2005-01-06 21:23:16]
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Re: fantasy world
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 09:26:11 PM AEST
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| Well... All I can say is, you're right. |
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Re: fantasy world
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by GingerB on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 09:26:11 PM AEST
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and I wouldnt be left standing alone.
Ginny |
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Re: fantasy world
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by autumngreeneyes on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 09:34:29 PM AEST
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| and we wouldn't have to ask for comments..LOL |
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