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Looking At You
Contributed by
New_York_Chick
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Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 09:14:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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I keep on looking at you
Trying to read your face
And untill you look back
I can't find my place
I lose all my words next to you
They get scattered into a mess
I never thought I'd feel something
So unbelievably hard to confess
You never showing a sign of interest
Confuses me more than any of life's troubles
So sure without you
So self-aware when you're around
A mystery I can't solve
I'd give anything to know what you're about
It seems like there's so much to say
But I wish there was nothing
Cause then I wouldn't have to go out of my way
To desperately think of something
And just looking at me would be kind of you
Would help me through each day I have no one to dream of
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New_York_Chick
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2005-01-06 21:14:56]
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Re: Looking At You
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by kidpoet_213 on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 10:33:46 PM AEST
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Let me be the 1st to say... I've been there and done that! And am doing this very same thing too! It's like the guy has no idea I'm alive even... or so it seems...
Good write... a lot of well expressed emotion there. it's always tough to write about... someone u secretly love... I know hat one too! Don't give u though... there's always hope!
~Donna~ |
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Re: Looking At You
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by afterdark on
Friday, 7th January 2005 @ 05:52:47 PM AEST
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| This was a very good write..Loved the depth of it. |
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Re: Looking At You
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 07:13:19 PM AEST
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beautiful and oh so sweet:) hugs n' love nessa
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