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Across The Ocean
Contributed by
New_York_Chick
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Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 09:06:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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You can be across the ocean
Far away, and I miss you sometimes
But your letters make me forget about
Being sad, they bring new smiles
I get scared you'll be tired of keeping in touch
I've already grown to depend on you
But when you call me, you tell so much
I know that in a way I help you too
I think of this as an easy test
And it hasn't taken us that long to pass
We're still the best of friends
Thank you for giving me a break from worrying
I know this'll never end
Copyright ©
New_York_Chick
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2005-01-06 21:06:16]
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Re: Across The Ocean
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by GingerB on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 09:09:40 PM AEST
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This is very sweet. I hope your love never gets tired, like mine did.
Ginny |
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Re: Across The Ocean
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by kidpoet_213 on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 10:38:59 PM AEST
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Very sweet... and touching... like a lil personal note... Just let love take you on it's wings and fly u across the ocean deep!
~Donna~ |
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Re: Across The Ocean
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 7th January 2005 @ 11:24:23 AM AEST
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Long distance relationships are hard to maintain, but can be rewarding. I think this is a strong poem, which describes genuine candour and friendship very effectively.
Well worth reading, NYC.
Thanks for sharing. |
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