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Sanity
Contributed by
AnaBanana
on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 08:43:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Everything has a purpose
and every purpose an explanation.
But how do you explain
the part where the purpose gets taken?
This sadness chokes me until I have
nothing left but emptiness.
The hurt and pain--
they strike my heart and they never miss.
My only escape is you,
but you are never here.
All I can do is think of you
whenever it seems like the end is near.
I walk away from this nothingness,
only to sit in an empty space that
seems to calm me down.
My thoughts travel at an even pace.
I look at my plain, empty wall
as I sit here waiting for you to
rescue me from all this pain.
I depend on you to keep me sane.
Copyright ©
AnaBanana
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2005-01-06 20:43:56] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Sanity
(User Rating: 1 ) by LevyMetal on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 08:46:23 PM AEST (User
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Ah, i totally loved this. It was so straight forward and creative. The flow was even good! |
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Re: Sanity
(User Rating: 1 ) by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 09:17:14 PM AEST (User
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i loved this. which is odd, because i usually dont like freestyle writes as much.i guess that just gives me more reason to think that this was written better than formatted writes =] very captivating and entrancing. |
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Re: Sanity
(User Rating: 1 ) by PhantomVampyress on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 09:20:54 PM AEST (User
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this is an awesome write.. I can totally relate to this.. great job
laterz
JENNI |
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