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Pieces of my Prison
Contributed by
blueyes11
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Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 08:31:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
ChristianPoetry
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i have kicked and reached from the depths
as that which was not meant to swim.
i have been tangled in complacency
and swallowed by the darkness.
i have fought the tides within and without
which hunger to drag me back inside my prison,
i have looked up to see
a passage to my freedom,
alas discovering my Way, Truth, and Life,
with a frantic gasp of air,
emerging and shattering the liquid surface
into a million crystal shards.
they catch the sun in a brilliant cascade
but once, in this moment of breaking.
as they shower down around me,
these pieces of my prison,
i weep at the beauty of their torment, now broken.
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blueyes11
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2005-01-06 20:31:22]
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Re: Pieces of my Prison
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by LevyMetal on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 08:38:20 PM AEST
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| This poem was beautiful in a sad way. |
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Re: Pieces of my Prison
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by GingerB on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 09:33:26 PM AEST
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very inspiring write
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