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rescue me!
Contributed by
blackpirate07
on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 08:21:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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theres nothing wrong
i should just push it all inside
but its bubbling to the surface
seeping out my pores
its making me sick
somehow i'm afraid
i want to run
i want to hide
darling save me
i don't even know who you are
but darling i'm so afraid
i'm so scared that i'll explode
and that no one will notice
no one will catch me in time
im so afraid that this pain in my chest
means more than just a little stress
its going to catch up to me
its going to choke me
darling i'll love you
if you'll take me away
you pretty, pretty thing
rescue me
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2005-01-06 20:21:40]
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Re: rescue me!
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by Runeath on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 08:34:08 PM AEST
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| I loved your poem. It really touched me, I know you probalely don't really care what I'm saying but I feel I needed to tell you how grate it is. |
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Re: rescue me!
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 09:20:05 PM AEST
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| great write. i always felt that one could rescue themselves because just think how much time has been wasted just waiting to be rescued. |
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Re: rescue me!
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Friday, 7th January 2005 @ 12:06:51 AM AEST
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| wow, this is awesome, well done!!!!!!! |
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