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I'm On My Knees

Contributed by socialburnin on Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 08:04:11 PM in AEST
Topic: ApologyPoetry

What do you write
When your inspirations gone?
What to you sing
When there is no more song?
Ive moved passed
My immaturity phase
Ive gone to far
To finally leave
When thoughts of you abound
And your never around
Its tough to feel love
When the object of your affection
Cant even love herself
This fight that we have
About letting me in
Is more then a test
Its a make or break point
I want to love you
And go all the way through
Your heart and soul
I know that you cut
And I know that you cry
But everytime you do
I think I will die
I wont call it quits
I wont give up this quick
Ill hold on to you
As long as you want me to
Its tough when I said
I loved you today
And you couldnt give me
The answer I need
Im cold without you
Im like summer without June
So Ill stand here and say
That if all you want is for me to leave
And just go away
Then I will
But please take my heart when you go

Copyright © socialburnin ... [ 2005-01-06 20:04:11]
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Re: I'm On My Knees (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 10:16:08 PM AEST
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very touching and sweet. especially powerful and emotional. i hope all goes well with you and devin.

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