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~*Let It Go The Right Way*~
Contributed by
nay
on
Tuesday, 3rd December 2002 @ 09:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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You know many people are hating on you right?
They thought I was gone move on to someone they know
But what they don’t know is I ain’t got time for somebody that wants to fight
Unlike them, you show me you care for me
That’s something I know for a fact
If they did, I really didn’t see
I think it was because I got so attached to them and fell to fast
That’s enough comparing, let me get on you and me…
You’re the one I know will last
There’s nothing I don’t like about you
I haven’t even known you for that long!
From the way I feel right now, you can’t be too good to be true
My feelings are flowing out real strong
You’re so sweet, I knew my heart would be the first thing you discovered
From what I feel, I know I’ll fall real deep
I know you want to get into my heart and see what secrets you can uncover
Secrets from you, I have none to keep
In such a short period of time, you mean the world to me
I must say, there’s no man like you!
You’re the one I want to love
All day, everyday, I want to feel your touch
I’ll give you my heart
We haven’t been together that long but I know I need you so much
Offer me your sweet caresses
Fill me with your wonderful light
Please soothe my aching heart
Hold me through the night
The mere sound of your voice summons deep emotions within
Like an old familiar song
Like the comfort from a friend
When you’re near, I get lost to so many thoughts of love
As you touch me with a magic
That’s as grand as stars above
Hold my hand
Hug me real tight
As I hunger your kiss
Give me sweet tidings of true love’s tender bliss
A promise that I will keep is that our love will soar
Carried on the wings of a dove
So give me your heart and bless me with your love…
Copyright ©
nay
... [
2002-12-03 09:00:00]
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Re: ~*Let It Go The Right Way*~
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by OreO on
Tuesday, 3rd December 2002 @ 09:05:24 AM AEST
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This is so beautiful, it's a wonderful expression of how you feel for this man...hope he see's it...thanks for sharing this beautiful piece ..it's nice to see love working for people..
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Re: ~*Let It Go The Right Way*~
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by MoonlitAngel on
Tuesday, 3rd December 2002 @ 08:27:32 PM AEST
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I love this! It's so honest and straightforward and filled with happiness. I can just feel the giddiness radiating off the screen! It made me want to go write my boyfriend an email, lol. I think I'll do that...
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Re: ~*Let It Go The Right Way*~
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by sweetolbaby on
Wednesday, 4th December 2002 @ 12:42:35 PM AEST
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| Nay-Nay, this is La'Vonne speaking, this poem is "THE BEST"! It is so straight forward. And you know that I can really relate. My mouth was dropping as I read this poem. This is truly deep, Nay, really deep! I'll HOLLA! |
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Re: ~*Let It Go The Right Way*~
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 31st December 2002 @ 07:20:15 PM AEST
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hey gurl that wass hot
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