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Eternal hell
Contributed by
blacksabbath026
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Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 06:25:06 PM in AEST
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I am afraid yet i am relieved
I left all the pain on earth
My only regret
Is that my family will mourne
It was easy to open my wrists
Almost as easy as it was meeting death
Where is he leading me?
For some reason he is laughing
Softly but insanely, suddenly
I dont feel all that relieved
When he starts to speak, he startles me
in a dark and cold voice he says
"Suicide, the unforgivable sin
Your fate is eternal hell!"
Crying, i begin to fall,
The black turns into fire
The heat is rising around me
As my emotions run wild
In a few minute i will meet satan
Confront what i ran from, eternal pain
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Re: Eternal hell
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 06:39:17 PM AEST
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You said I dont know what I am talking about.Uh huh!You have wrote that you are the "antichrist" but now in this piece you are going to meet Satan,confront what you ran from,eternal pain,but you are the antichrist,what are you soo afraid of?Open your arms baby and meet who you have been
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Re: Eternal hell
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by Rottenrioter on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 07:00:59 PM AEST
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| i like this...nice wright |
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Re: Eternal hell
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by LevyMetal on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 08:24:12 PM AEST
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| It was clearly written and ironic. I enjoyed it. I once heard someone say that Hell is everything Heaven isnt, full of sin (drugs, sex, murder, alcohol, pain)-it really made me think if thats the case, then where do i sign up!? lol great write... |
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Re: Eternal hell
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by afterdark on
Friday, 7th January 2005 @ 05:59:02 PM AEST
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| "I am afraid yet i am relieved" The route you are heading is one that seems to be marked by a detour..Much of this is very very much in contradiction..Try spell check on words..And ad an "s" when it needs to be placed..Ughh..I can imagine the English program in your school system is in turmoil. |
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