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Can You Keep a Secret
Contributed by
blossomingcherry5353
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Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 06:03:22 PM in AEST
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SecretLove
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Can you keep a secret?
Not spread it around,
The boy I like and dream about,
Is standing beside the wall,
He's the one I told you about,
The one with those big brown eyes,
Spikey hair,
And goofy smile,
He makes me want to laugh,
But at the same time make me cry,
See, I notice him,
Does he notice me?
I know he may not like me,
And I know this love can't be,
For he is in love with another,
And that person isn't me,
So, now that you know,
Just answer this,
Can you keep a secret?
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blossomingcherry5353
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2005-01-06 18:03:22]
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Re: Can You Keep a Secret
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by GingerB on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 09:01:30 PM AEST
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the question is: can YOU keep it a secret?
Nice write.
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Re: Can You Keep a Secret
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by mina-1 on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 11:28:47 PM AEST
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great write. i really enjoyed reading ur poem.
a secret like that isn't a secret for 2 long...
luv,
sue |
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Re: Can You Keep a Secret
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by brokenwings on
Friday, 7th January 2005 @ 01:12:05 AM AEST
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| very nice write... sometimes you might want your secret to be known... |
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