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Suicide, So Beautiful
Contributed by
EternalNight4x
on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 05:44:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Suicide is so beautiful
Deciding your own death
Choosing the time and place
You’ll take your one last breath
Effecting the lives
Of all you know
And how you felt
To them will show
You’ll live on within their hearts
Never top be forgotten
To be remembered on for so long
Isn’t it worth this sin
You can choose what you eat
When you sleep, who are your friends
But isn’t it funny how you cannot
Choose the way you end
Death it’s not the end
But only the beginning
An escape from the world
A release from all your sinning
Effecting the lives of everyone else
Never again will they forget
The reason behind why at so young
Death you soon had met
Suicide it’s so beautiful
Deciding your own death
Choosing the time and place
You’ll take your one last breath
Copyright ©
EternalNight4x
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2005-01-06 17:44:25]
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Re: Suicide, So Beautiful
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 05:51:33 PM AEST
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| WHAT IF THE SUICIDE FAILS AND YOU LIVE THE REST OF YOUR LIFE ON A RESPIRATOR,WILL THAT BE BEAUTIFUL,for that would cost your family alot more than your funeral |
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Re: Suicide, So Beautiful
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by Tru2Myself on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 06:08:01 PM AEST
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Some of your poems are my favorite on the site like wow they are amazing. but I cant decide about his one. I dunno...
Lauren |
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Re: Suicide, So Beautiful
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by blacksabbath026 on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 06:27:28 PM AEST
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| id dissagree with the above two, i like this one, its very good, besides lovely29 dosent know what shes talking about |
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Re: Suicide, So Beautiful
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by pixie on
Friday, 7th January 2005 @ 06:50:29 AM AEST
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suicide isnt the answer as you would leave more pain behind, i hope this is just a vent and you dont intend to do anything... expressed well
pixie xx |
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