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Kiss of Death
Contributed by
bonita2689
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Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 03:14:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
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My tears touch the canvas
bewitching it with sorrows that roar
that flow throughout the chasms of my soul
only to become an alluring abyss
to captivate my bliss
and strangle the hope that resides within
A scythe to my ignorance
madness encompasses my soul
my blood, ink to the blade
gushing with a crystal jade
I fall and surrender to this evil demon
sucking the life out of all that is living
it's poison sinks deeper and deeper into my skin
As I go numb my heart gives in
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bonita2689
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2005-01-06 15:14:51]
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Re: Kiss of Death
(User Rating: 1 )
by gherkin on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 03:31:31 PM AEST
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Not sure about the tone of this one, but i do like your style.
The way you rhyme flows-it's not awkward as if you've been trying to find words that fit.
Keep the good work coming
gherkin
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Re: Kiss of Death
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by nogusto435 on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 04:27:48 PM AEST
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| i think that this is an sawesome poem |
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