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2 sides
Contributed by
Lostinside
on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 03:05:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I am
Two people
They're Fighting
One side
It wants To Die
It wants to leave
From this
World it's in
The other side
Stays strong
Is living a life
Doesn't want
To go
To die
So I wanna know
What side
Is stronger
Is gonna
Win the fight
Copyright ©
Lostinside
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2005-01-06 15:05:47]
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Re: 2 sides
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by bonita2689 on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 03:32:03 PM AEST
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| You so just nailed exactly how I feel right now. I figure this is way better than anything I could have come up with. PM if you want ... anytime! Awesome, Awesome poem! |
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Re: 2 sides
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by TaintedSoul on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 03:32:13 PM AEST
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A very dramatic write that speaks so much in so few words. There are so many out there who go through this every day of their lives. Profound doesn't even begin to cover this!
peace
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