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IF ONE DAY.....
Contributed by
backs_romeo
on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 02:24:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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IF ONE DAY U FEEL LIKE CRYING ,
C A L L M E ......
I DONT PROMISE U MAKE U LAUGH ,
B U T ....
I PROMISE TO CRY WITH U .
IF ONE DAY U DONT WANT TO LICEN ANYONE ,
C A L L M E .....
I PROMISE I WILL BE THERE,
A N D ....
PROMISE TOO I WILL BE QUITE.
IF ONE DAY U WISH SOMETHING ,
C A L L M E .....
I PROMISE TO FULFIL UR WISH.
IF ONE DAY U WANT SOMETHING FROM ME ,
C A L L M E .....
I DONT PROMISE TO REFUSE IT,
B U T .......
I PROMISE TO GIVE U CUZ MY ALL THINGS IS URS.
IF ONE THERE IS NO ONE TO LOVE U ,
C A L L M E ......
I DONT PROMISE TO DISHEART U ,
B U T .....
I PROMISE TO LOVE U .
IF ONE DAY U CALL ME ...
A N D ......
THERE IS NO ANSWER COME FAST TO SEE ME ,
CUZZZ I NEED U .
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2005-01-06 14:24:23]
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Re: IF ONE DAY.....
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 02:38:47 PM AEST
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| First, no all caps stuff. Second, spell out "you." From there, it can only get better. Cheers! |
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Re: IF ONE DAY.....
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by Pocket on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 02:40:02 PM AEST
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| You might want to spell check! This poem doesn't really seem to convey any passion either. |
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Re: IF ONE DAY.....
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by autumngreeneyes on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 03:53:49 PM AEST
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F ONE DAY U DONT WANT TO LICEN ANYONE ,
C A L L M E .....
I PROMISE I WILL BE THERE,
A N D ....
PROMISE TOO I WILL BE QUITE.
Is this the word "listen?..or ebonics..or what? and to not be loud is quiet.. sorry..I'm only trying to help... |
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Re: IF ONE DAY.....
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by backs_romeo on
Friday, 7th January 2005 @ 08:46:34 AM AEST
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HEY I M BACKS ROMEO II USED SOME SHORT WORD SO PLZ SORRY IF U DONT LIKE IT
HEY PLZ VOTE MA POEM ALSO |
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Re: IF ONE DAY.....
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by backs_romeo on
Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 05:23:46 AM AEST
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YAAR THIS IS MY FIRST POEM N U GUYS REALLY DISHEARTED ME SO THAT I MAKEA PLAN TO NEVER WRITE A POEM AGAIN
BYE
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