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Here I Am
Contributed by
Sinned
on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 01:37:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Here I am
I love your freshness
Your smile your face
I love the very eccence of you
Where would I be without your hand
Here I am
Helpless as puddy
My hearts a mess
Those blue eyes melt my soul
Yet I stand
Here I am
Desire burns throught out and within
What have I done
I do not know
I love you and want to be your husband
Here I am
Love struck
Unloved
As a frosted moon your love is cold
In this abyss of hell stands a man
Here I am
Wanting only you
This fire engulffs my very heart
You turn your back and say
We travel to a beat of a different drum
Here I am
Wanting you
To live our lives
Together in happiness
Was that too much to demand
Sinned
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Sinned
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2005-01-06 13:37:30]
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Re: Here I Am
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 02:35:12 PM AEST
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| Sigh... so sweet. If someone were to love my mother like that, it'd be good for her. But she would also refuse, darn her. Very emotionally powerful write. Cheers! |
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Re: Here I Am
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by oxluvlaughingxo on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 03:30:23 PM AEST
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| shows a lot of emotion. I really like it. |
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Re: Here I Am
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by bonita2689 on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 03:51:27 PM AEST
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A beautiful representation of what I am going through right now. It is quite confusing and hurtful isnt it. I feel pinned to these words:
Here I am
Wanting you
To live our lives
Together in happiness
Thank you for this piece its beautiful! |
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Re: Here I Am
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by Mangs on
Friday, 7th January 2005 @ 11:14:58 PM AEST
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Very nice write..very painful...
Umang. |
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