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today i lost
Contributed by
prozac_memory
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Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 12:40:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Today I lost my mind
Today I cut my heart out for you
With a rusty chrome so sharp
It left me bleeding till the screams were distant
But I was bleeding for you - so everything is alright
Today I lost my mind
Today I cut my heart out for you
Before I’m drained away
I’ll wrap it up and send it to you
In a pretty box with a tag with your name
Today I lost my mind
Today I cut my heart out for you
I hope I didn’t send it to her by mistake
She already has all I want
She already has you, my life, my love, my heart
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2005-01-06 12:40:19]
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Re: today i lost
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by hellsfallenangel on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 12:53:30 PM AEST
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kool write i like it alot i write psycotic poetry read some bye
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Re: today i lost
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by TaintedSoul on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 03:06:23 PM AEST
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Situations like this make one feel as if they have died. Great write, tragic.
peace
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Re: today i lost
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by bonita2689 on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 03:58:28 PM AEST
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| oooh burn and sting kinda stuff... sounds hurtful. My deepest sympathies |
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Re: today i lost
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by Kano on
Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 08:17:48 AM AEST
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| Thats a deep poem, I liked it and can relate. the loss of a loved one has to be one of the worst kinds of pain. |
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