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YOUR MY YOU
Contributed by
abie05
on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 12:29:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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you are my passion
my reason to live
i'll offer you my love
everything that i can give
you are my happy ending
a fairytale come true
there's nothing in this world i'd rather do
than to spend a lifetime of forever...
... loving only YOU ...
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abie05
... [
2005-01-06 12:29:36] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: YOUR MY YOU
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 12:39:50 PM AEST (User
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Not that it's not good. It is but... sounds like a greeting card. Keep working at it! Cheers! |
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