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Scrubbing windows
Contributed by
LevyMetal
on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 11:54:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
HumorPoetry
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Consumption, consume-
Con artists who assume.
Aloft, elope-
Lemme get one more hit of that dope.
Cha-ching says the register
cha chingy ching say the customers.
Bling bling goes my ice
Yo, your smile is colder then vanilla ice.
Supply, demand-
Smoke from your second hand.
Particular, partial-
now its time for a commercial.
oi, oi, buzz.
Nothing sounds as good as a can opening.
click, clack, foammm
Gimmie my beer punk before i kick yo friends out.
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2005-01-06 11:54:06]
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Re: Scrubbing windows
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 12:10:10 PM AEST
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"your smile is colder then vanilla ice" kinda like that. Most of the time people smile like that when they are confused as to what they *should* feel. I like how you filled this with emotion without saying "I feel." Something I should be more adept at. Cheers!
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Re: Scrubbing windows
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 12:25:19 PM AEST
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