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Through Your Words
Contributed by
Solnubis
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Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 11:28:26 AM in AEST
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Through your words I see the beauty that you invision in me.
Your words infuse feelings in my world that I have not felt in many moons gone by.
They make me feel emotions that have been bottled up and washed out at sea.
I would never have guessed that someone could find that bottle and open it again ever so gently.
We have not meet face to face, we have only connected through our fingers.
But I already feel you growing for me and I for you.
You have not seen me true; but you are getting to know my inner most secrets
and thoughts that I carry within.
Slowly I am letting my emotions seep out through my shield of refuge.
The comaflage that I had created to surround myself with, so that I could not feel
or react to my arousals are peeling away through the layers of protective walls I built around me..
Now this confidence that I am sensing to trust you
and confide in you makes me feel alive again.
You see that I have something to give
and I want to stick around and see them fully
through your eyes when we meet.
Copyright ©
Solnubis
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2005-01-06 11:28:26]
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Re: Through Your Words
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 11:39:30 AM AEST
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I just love this. I've felt these feelings before (more than once). Hope it works out for you.
I think it's spelled "camoflage", just FYI. Probably a typo, but I thought to tell ya. "react to my arousals" is intriguing and appealing. Cheers!
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Re: Through Your Words
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by pixie on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 11:44:15 AM AEST
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aww such a nice poem , I am glad you have found someone to bring you happiness, I wish you well
pixie xx |
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Re: Through Your Words
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 12:57:57 PM AEST
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WOW!! Amazing write...... I love this very much..and can relate as I'm sure many of us can... just couldnt put is down as eloquently as you did...
Jenni |
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Re: Through Your Words
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by Ravensfire on
Friday, 7th January 2005 @ 12:03:20 AM AEST
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| AWESOME, burns in my soul, my heart. ravensfire |
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Re: Through Your Words
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 10:28:50 PM AEST
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| Great write! |
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Re: Through Your Words
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by assassinatorgirl on
Wednesday, 30th November 2005 @ 07:47:51 PM AEST
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| i've felt the same. 17 days till i see him though :) awesome poem i love the imagery and word choice! |
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