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Please Heartache
Contributed by
pixie
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Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 11:08:44 AM in AEST
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I beg you, please heartache,
Leave me alone or I will break,
Shatter like a china doll,
Curl up & die like suicides moll.
You rain down on me all day,
Even at night you fail to go away,
I wouldn’t ask but I am in dire need,
Of giving my heart a chance not to bleed.
What will it take to make you see?
That what you’re doing is killing me,
Or is it that you just don’t care,
In your chest no heart you have there?
Do you not know mercy & its meaning?
Is this the way I deserve to be feeling?
I have made mistakes & I’m trying to learn,
But I can’t if I feel your constant burn.
You knock on my door uninvited,
To see me crumble gets you all excited,
I think I have paid for things that I did,
So please to me a good day will you bid?
Copyright ©
pixie
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2005-01-06 11:08:44]
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Re: Please Heartache
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by PhantomVampyress on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 11:14:12 AM AEST
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aww pixie heartache is hard to get over but this is a beautiful write. hang in there.. keep busy don't let it get to you
peace and hope
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Re: Please Heartache
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by DorianChambers on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 12:15:13 PM AEST
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your still the writter u always were, this poem has a
nice flow 2 it, enjoyed reading it, unfortunately and
just speaking 4 my self, sorry 2 say, some people just don't care, then maby they just don't know how 2, keep up the good writting . . .
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Re: Please Heartache
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by julieh on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 12:31:04 PM AEST
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| you can feel the heartache in reading this poem....take care jux |
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Re: Please Heartache
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by autumngreeneyes on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 12:31:25 PM AEST
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| awwww..I care..and hope that bad old heartache goes away..anything I can do??? great write though.. |
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Re: Please Heartache
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 12:35:49 PM AEST
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Another tear-jerker here, Pix.. Hope you feel better real soon and write your happy poetry again..
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: Please Heartache
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by Rakerman1999 on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 12:38:45 PM AEST
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I love writes like this Pixie....you are very talented my friend. Great R&R as always
Very well done
Roses
Larry |
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Re: Please Heartache
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 03:32:00 PM AEST
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| Wonderful poem pixie, remember, we don't judge and we all love you here............Mike |
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