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Pandora's Box
Contributed by
enjoiskating6
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Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 10:46:14 AM in AEST
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My mouth is locked and I hold the key,
But I'm pandora's box with pain i'de set free,
So I hold the agony inside my heart,
which tears at my mind and rips it apart,
The dispair you recieve leaves me walking on ice,
i'd walk on water but miracles are for Christ,
It's impossible to fold anything over seven times,
But I have folded more than humans commit crimes,
So who will save you if you dont save yourself?
You're that out of date can in the back of the shelf,
My silence is words and I'm out of breath,
While your tears are the rain and we all drown to death,
I will never be able to shield you from pain,
For reasons i know but cannot explain,
It disintigrates my mind to sand on the beach,
To know your heart found a blood sucking leach,
Thiers one thing ill say and i dont care who knows,
You mean more to me then red to a rose,
And i'll be there forever as long as you cry,
And i'll go to hell before I say goodbye.
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Re: Pandora's Box
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by ERiN_BuRgEr on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 11:01:57 AM AEST
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wow....that was brilliant .....U see it was deep and poignant ....but also enjoyable to read ......it made a deep emotional statement without soudning chessy or cliched which is very diffucult to do.....Great piece....Excellent slices of imagery in there to which were good , really added something to the poem...
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Re: Pandora's Box
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by LevyMetal on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 12:10:39 PM AEST
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| Creative and good rhyming. |
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Re: Pandora's Box
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by Jezabel on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 01:16:51 PM AEST
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| sacrificed luv. nice. |
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Re: Pandora's Box
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by have1 on
Wednesday, 26th October 2005 @ 05:19:00 AM AEST
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| Open the box surprise us all. |
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