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Enticing
Contributed by
Jezabel
on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 10:09:29 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Shell-shocked,
Indiscriminate
In passion she
Lovemakes.
Caged,
The animal
Void left.
Breaking out
Pours champagne
In celebration.
Enticement
Repeated
In the spaces
Between the mounds
On her chest.
Copyright ©
Jezabel
... [
2005-01-06 10:09:29] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Enticing
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 11:52:04 AM AEST (User
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Certainly sounds like one.....
Nice write...a few bits don't make sense, but I think it adds to the imagination... |
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Re: Enticing
(User Rating: 1 ) by travisk on
Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 10:38:38 PM AEST (User
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nice imagery |
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