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Take A Few Seconds To Really Look At Yourself

Contributed by declinefoale on Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 09:54:29 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Look at yourself
so big, so scary
your army marches through the streets,
your eyes extend all your anger
so big, so scary

Look underneath
so small, so scared
you stretch out for love, no ones there
thoughs eyes they show me all your fear
so small, so scared

Copyright © declinefoale ... [ 2005-01-06 09:54:29]
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Re: Take A Few Seconds To Really Look At Yourself (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 10:23:39 AM AEST
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The fact that you were inspired to write after reading my poem has made me smile. Im flattered. People like those in the poem are in my opinion lost causes, where is the hope? With the good? The burning question is can anything be done? I would love to be wrong but I say not.

Re: Take A Few Seconds To Really Look At Yourself (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 10:29:29 AM AEST
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This reminds me of my father. There are so many like this. There are others though who operate from a position of strength taking a stand on right and wrong. The question is who to be and why to choose. Never let the fear win.
Stitch

Re: Take A Few Seconds To Really Look At Yourself (User Rating: 1 )
by blueyes11 on Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 08:55:40 PM AEST
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so short and simple, yet it says so much. i loved it! very powerful.

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