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suicide
Contributed by
dantoad
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Tuesday, 3rd December 2002 @ 04:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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i wanted so bad to end it all
to stop the pain
and all the little people with their snotty ideas
think they know it all
when none of them understand
and then they locked me up when it was over
and i laughed because i knew that i didn't need protection from myself, only later would i need it
and now it is later
and i am running fast trying to save me before i eventually off myself
i just want somewhere warm and safe
with someone i love
but all i have seen is cold and heartbreak
and being shoved away and ignored
screaming for a chance to breathe again
the sweet sunshine
one day i will see the sun
i hope
never realizing how many others
have seen the darkness like i am seeing
never knowing what to do and where to go
hoping for a better place
its unimaginable really, if only they could all see
how they hurt
my old scissor wounds opened up
and they burn like i have signed with my blood
and sold my soul to the devil
but it doesn't matter anymore
who has my soul
i will be gone someday anyways, and no one will remember who i was.
Copyright ©
dantoad
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2002-12-03 04:30:00]
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Re: suicide
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by fayeelizibeth on
Tuesday, 3rd December 2002 @ 12:57:05 PM AEST
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| oh- this is it- this is a perfect capture of some of the emotions that i'v felt at times- it's so sad and painful- and u can't get away-----great writing |
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Re: suicide
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by bobotheclown on
Tuesday, 3rd December 2002 @ 02:21:26 PM AEST
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I've been there many times. The confusion and ppl with their empty words. It hurts. I love this poem it captures the feelings and emotion almost perfectly. Thanx for putting your feelings down here its hard sometimes I know.
- Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: suicide
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by orgygirl on
Tuesday, 3rd December 2002 @ 06:46:15 PM AEST
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Exactly. Thanks for sharing. And don't kill yourself , there maybe hope for us yet.
Take care |
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Re: suicide
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by Ophelia on
Wednesday, 4th December 2002 @ 11:20:26 AM AEST
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| I pray to god that this is fictional. But if not I hope that you can overcome all this pain. I know what you are saying, it's like being totally alonw and you're not even there to save yourself. But you know what? Things will work out just keep saying that and find yourself and a friend that makes you laugh always. You're a talented artist b y the way |
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Re: suicide
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by 0o_Jelly_Bean_o0 on
Wednesday, 23rd April 2003 @ 01:37:40 AM AEST
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| When you can be sitting in sunshine, But only see and feel complete darkness, and it feels like this big black cloud is floating over your head, the sunshine so many other people enjoy wont wash away the darkness you are feeling.. Great write. |
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Re: suicide
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by Ash on
Monday, 12th May 2003 @ 05:09:13 PM AEST
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| Beautiful, frigthening and accruate. Try to see through the darkness, and i know how hard that is. Thanks, looking forward to your next write. |
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