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The Evolution of Girls
Contributed by
AnastasiaN
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Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 02:52:23 AM in AEST
Topic:
sarcasticpoetry
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too fake to be real
too self-involved to feel
too different to see
where you used to be
too selfish to understand
too stubborn to make amends
too immature to realize
where your faults lie
too concerned about other views
too dishonest to be true
too much of a coward to be yourself
you have to follow everyone else
too late to gain respect
what you present is what you get
too sleazy to care
that's why i'm not there
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AnastasiaN
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2005-01-06 02:52:23]
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Re: The Evolution of Girls
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 05:17:24 AM AEST
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| It's nicely written sarcasm, but I HAVE TO correct you-not all girls are like that. You may just be looking in the wrong places. |
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Re: The Evolution of Girls
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by brew on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 08:09:21 AM AEST
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I get what you meant......and i do agree with the myst persons comment. But..........its not always females who are "fake"........its in all people. Good write tho!
Brew~ |
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Re: The Evolution of Girls
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by AnastasiaN on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 09:47:55 AM AEST
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| let me make a comment...i'm not making any kind of judgement on all girls. just the ones i know, this comes from my own life. thanks for the comments. |
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