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Other Side
Contributed by
luna_mica
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Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 01:06:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
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This written on the night
Of my possible death
In this sudden morbid light
I have perfect retrospect
To an outsider it would seem
I lead a life of counseling
But to me I only dream
Of helping a human being
I live as though I'm alone
I sin like there's no tomorrow
To die I might atone
And heal my soul of sorrow
There is not hope for me
To become perfect health
This freak is all I see
When I look at myself
Too long I have waited
Too long I have not done
Too long I have procrastinated
Tonight I will be gone
My life has been a lie
My death will be a lie
To all I say goodbye
See you on the other side.
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luna_mica
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2005-01-06 01:06:27]
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Re: Other Side
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by blowfish_jane on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 01:21:07 AM AEST
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This is such a sad powerful write, strong emotions are shown here, good poem.
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Re: Other Side
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by wray on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 04:55:58 AM AEST
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What a way to greet a new year...
Sad poem that represents how a lot of young people feel these days. I found the final line a bit out of place, otherwise I quite enjoyed this one. |
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Re: Other Side
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 05:40:19 PM AEST
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| sad, emotional, despairing, yet well expressed. |
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