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White Wings
Contributed by
Jezabel
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Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 12:31:16 AM in AEST
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White wings
Nite sky
Touch me
I cry
Love me
I'm high
You come
I fly
Rest now
I die.
Want me
I lie.
Kiss me
Goodbye.
Copyright ©
Jezabel
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2005-01-06 00:31:16]
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Re: White Wings
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by blowfish_jane on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 01:21:36 AM AEST
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That was short, i like the flow tho. Good write.
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Re: White Wings
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by wray on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 04:59:53 AM AEST
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| Short and sweet as they say, or rather short and bitter. I like how the end is cut off (14 lines in total instead of 16) like an abrupt death. |
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Re: White Wings
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by autumngreeneyes on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 02:32:34 PM AEST
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| I like the way this is done..good job.. |
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